ONE

The One - YOU knew I was... the One - WE are...

One

 

ONE Love... This we have created - ONE.
Living in the moment, looking into the next...
We grow stronger in a faith that most do not
experience.
We keep our hands on this world - we own it.
Looking into the sky, those stars immense oblivious,
we are their keepers.
We are ONE, this Love above and beyond any previous.
Consider the source never forget... Life Partners.
Let the waves wash out - reach for the Mountain Tops...
Creating everything new... the future - we use the past.
My Love is an Eternal Fire... engulfed.
Embrace our fulfillment...
Carry me...
Fill me...
I am your mirror reflection.

 

Copyright ©2008  Candida Dawne Colson

 

Author's Note

I am intrigued... please do give me honesty.

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Lovely, Candi.. a beautiful poem and nicely written.. I would love a love as this, we all would..
It also reminded me of U2 One.. one love but we're not the same we've got to carry each other, carry each other.. of course they are talking brotherly and sisterly love..
God poem.

Chloe
xoxo

[Cece]

nice poem
so unique
for a love poem
not overbearing
but so full of intensive
without saying
i love you
i love you
i love you
i love you
i love you
i love you

[Michelle Lea]

I wish I had this (-:
I love the wording, so beautiful!

[Nicholas Hallows]

Yes, a beautiful poem and intelligently crafted.
My comments mirror those of everybody else.
NH

[ELii]

This is a very beautiful poem that leaves me in deep thought. One Love where we are all one. One where we are all on one flow. To find the perfect flow with the one where you see your own reflection. Finding happiness within one's self is on the road to the one. I really do love this poem. Makes me thing random thoughts of different people, or things that can be the One. We are all one, the same, but different. Ok, I am going to stop now. lol. Nice one!

[mattavelli]

Very cool. it reads from top to bottom and bottom to top. :)

[xMoonLightx]

this beautifully written

this poem really must of taken time to write becuase you can tell it came directly from your heart and soul.

it has alot of passion in it and you can feel the emotion it evokes really really well.

bravo!

-xMoonLightx-

[SweetPeachesAlways]

well-written, beautiful, poignant...thank you for sharing...

[C. M. Miller]

You've done it again with this piece! The ending of this poem just RUSHING over me . . . renewal, beyond the flood of life and emotions, there is the calm of an all-consuming love. Well done!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Finding inner piece and love for yourself is always the first step to true happiness... what a deeply personal poem that shines with positive energy.

[Aya Fayyad]

fantastic piece! i saw such a beautiful soul , so passionate and sweet :)
thank you for sharing .