Thinking of You Always

Thinking of You Always

A Poem by Ashli The Amazing
"

i wrote this for a specific someone[:

"

I had this dream

It was so amazing

It was just me and you

The sky was light blue

The grass was dark green

I had such a wonderful feeling

We we're both very happy

And for once i wasn't feeling so crappy

I wanted our time together

To last forever and ever

As i stared into your eyes

My tummy filled with butterflies

And when you moved closer to me

My heart started pounding like crazy

But when you kissed my cheek

I couldn't help but weep

As i layed in your arms

I suddenly heard the sound of my alarm

And when i opened my eyes

I let out a few deep sighs

I couldn't help but smile

No one's made me feel this way in a while

I know someday this dream will come true

I just wanted to let you know that i'm always thinking of you <3

© 2011 Ashli The Amazing


Author's Note

Ashli The Amazing
well please tell me what you think because i'd really love to know [: thanks <3

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So sweet!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


ooo wow loved this, every line of it ! :D really awesome and a beautiful piece

Posted 12 Years Ago


amazing!! get it ur Ashli the Amazing!! hahaha! no seriously beatiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I hope whoever it is hears this lovely message.. It's simply beautiful..x

Posted 12 Years Ago


Omg this reminds me of my bestfriend... Becuz i always feel like that laying in his arms.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I loved it! Emotions flowed though the poem and it had a great ending. Nice Job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very cute! Such a lovely feel-good type of poem. I like it because it has a very uplifting ending, and a great overall style. Very nice :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 8, 2011
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Ashli The Amazing
Ashli The Amazing

riverbank, CA



About
Names Ashli. I'm 16. A junior in high school. I'm Straight. I love music. I love singing I have a YouTube account (search Ashli Cisneros) I love rainbows, UNICORNS, and writing poetry in my free time... more..

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