I'm a Pillow. :)

I'm a Pillow. :)

A Poem by Candylove.
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Inanimate object writing. I don't know why I'm posting this, ha. :D

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I am a pillow. I'm cushioned precisely to give you what you want, and what you need; a good night's sleep. I am the source of a relentless perfection that does in fact, help you dream. There's a certain grace in the way I am used. Your head hitting my smooth, cold surface is a feeling like no other. It makes me happy knowing that I give peace of thought to your raging mind, and I am addicted to the smell of your skin. I am having a love affair with your face each and every night. My intuition lies on both sides of me, and it's like I know what your thinking. I'm here to comfort you unconditionally and guide you through your slumber. :)

© 2010 Candylove.


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very sweet...i smiled throughout...i needed a smile...thank you for giving it to me :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was a cushy, comfy poem to read. You're awesome, you know that? You deserve someone to be a pillow to you too, you know. :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


I enjoyed this. Again very well written. Really liked your story type of format it works well. Nicely done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I liked this! :) The imagery is really nice, and I love the persona you gave the pillow. It's interesting, and I think that's quite an accomplishment! I think normally I would have blown a poem off if someone told me it was about a pillow, but this caught my attention! Nicely done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is both playful and insightful, and it creates such imagery within the mind of the reader. Loved the style and form!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like this one.
I'm not good at putting myself in a different perspective, but you seemed to have no trouble capturing the thoughts of a loving pillow. :)
Great job! ;D

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was enjoyable to read : ) I too wonder where the inspiration to write this came from

Posted 13 Years Ago


i wonder what inspired this piece, cause i like it a lot

Posted 13 Years Ago


haha i love me some soft pillows and reading your poems has the same affect :) those words are so comforting i feel as though your speaking to me lol pretty pillow.
Brilliant writing Candy♥

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is really awesome,
It's great that you put yourself in a different perspective,
but it also seems like it's coming from a person who is used, who comforts and cares for regularly.
i really like your writing, the detail is amazing,
great work

Posted 13 Years Ago



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