Inanimate object writing. I don't know why I'm posting this, ha. :D
I am a pillow. I'm cushioned precisely to give you what you want, and what you need; a good night's sleep. I am the source of a relentless perfection that does in fact, help you dream. There's a certain grace in the way I am used. Your head hitting my smooth, cold surface is a feeling like no other. It makes me happy knowing that I give peace of thought to your raging mind, and I am addicted to the smell of your skin. I am having a love affair with your face each and every night. My intuition lies on both sides of me, and it's like I know what your thinking. I'm here to comfort you unconditionally and guide you through your slumber. :)
I liked this! :) The imagery is really nice, and I love the persona you gave the pillow. It's interesting, and I think that's quite an accomplishment! I think normally I would have blown a poem off if someone told me it was about a pillow, but this caught my attention! Nicely done!
I really like this one.
I'm not good at putting myself in a different perspective, but you seemed to have no trouble capturing the thoughts of a loving pillow. :)
Great job! ;D
haha i love me some soft pillows and reading your poems has the same affect :) those words are so comforting i feel as though your speaking to me lol pretty pillow.
Brilliant writing Candy♥
This is really awesome,
It's great that you put yourself in a different perspective,
but it also seems like it's coming from a person who is used, who comforts and cares for regularly.
i really like your writing, the detail is amazing,
great work