Alcoholic's Cure

Alcoholic's Cure

A Poem by Sunny

Drink the poison in the cup and watch the pain slip away
Drink the poison in the cup, tomorrow will be a better day
But what happens when tomorrow comes and disappoints?
Lift the cup and drink a few sips more :/

© 2010 Sunny


Author's Note

Sunny
i found the picture on tumblr and wrote this... changed the last line

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Short and yet so Powerful(: Amazing!
-Keturah

Posted 8 Years Ago


very effective message in a short poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


a bottomless cup...very well expressed.
blessings,
~M

Posted 8 Years Ago


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J.M
This is a very powerful and vivid poem, it really expresses the repetitive pattern of drinking. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very nice. The last line trails off like an unfinished thought, as it's shorter than the other lines, but it works. Seems to be almost like a verse. Good job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


An never ending battle unless we take the first step
Nice piece well done.


Posted 9 Years Ago


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... ah ... that is so inspiring ... what a potent message ... and how brilliantly rendered in such few lines ... you are so skillful and so poetic ... "but what happens when tomorrow comes and disappoints" ... is my favourite line ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


I really liked the first two lines here. Nice work.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on May 11, 2010
Last Updated on May 23, 2010
Tags: addiction, crutch

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Sunny

Lauderdale Lakes, FL



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