Lasting

for friendship is a cherished gift

it lifts, enriches, outlives time

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when death destroyed your beating heart

it cast a shadow over mine

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this morning as i sipped on tea

i swear i saw you wave at me

Reviews

[Dreamer Sima]

So touching piece this one, I just loved it. Friendship is a precious gift to treasure and cherish. Once a bond is created it remains with us forever. And no word can describe the void that lingers in our hearts when we lose that friend. I am quite touched by this.

[Christine Anne Shaw]

A very special friend Sima who sadly died at 46 leaving behind three young children. She lived opposite us for many years. Your review is very thoughtful. Thank you.

Chris

[Dreamer Sima]

So sad to hear this. Though her physical presence is absent but i know the eternal bond between you two will remain alive forever, you are such a lovely person. Love

[DIVYA]

Oh this is so vivid, it punched me in the gut! I sensed how time heals our grief but somewhere within, the undercurrent of missing them is so alive and a little breeze or anything in the moment brings them back as if they're there right in front of us. Dear Chris, this poem of few words had a very powerful effect on me!

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Thank you DIVYA for your encouragement. You are much appreciated.

Chris

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow, The ending had an emotional punch to it.

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Thank you Dale. Appreciate you checking in. All good wishes.

Chris

[Tepo]

I am also sure you saw that wave
And she wouldn't be waving if she didn't want you knowing she is ok.
I love when I can feel another's writing
Like this
Only
This takes a certain belief to feel
Quite beautifully written

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Thank you Tepo for leaving such a lovely comment. Much appreciated.

Chris

[lightsong]

I can swear with You too dear Chirs, as I believe like You do... just because they left to the other side it doesn't mean that they don't connect with us, they do in their own spiritual ways, some people are aware of that, others are not. I'm sorry for Your loss, still Your poem evokes warm feelings of love and tranquility.

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Dear lightsong, your visit and review so welcome. Thank you.

Chris

[Einstein Noodle]

oh wow! precious write says i! into me ol' library this one goes ... you packed it with fine poetic ryhming couplets .. packed it with story and emotion ... really fine poetry ma'am!
E.

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Dear Mr E, couldn't ask for a more encouraging review. So pleased you like this one. Delighted it will go in your library :)) Sending you all good wishes.

Chris

[red93]

Nicely written Chris and again this is where short form Poetry scores everytime, leaving the reader to 'fill in the gaps'. Excellent use of half-rhyme as well.

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Thank you red93 for your encouragement. Means a great deal.

Chris

[Just Kim]

What an amazing write, right here. This is wonderful

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Thank you so much Kim. I appreciate your visit. Good to see you. Take care.

[Stella Armour]

Lovely thoughts Chris, i am sure when we pass we do leave a part of our essence with those we were close to ....

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Many thanks dear Stella for checking in. Much appreciated. Happy Saturday.

Chris

[Stella Armour]

My pleasure ..... :)

[Dave]

This is so beautiful. Friends are so hard to come by. I love the following definition of a friend:
A friend is someone who knows all there is to know about you and likes you anyway.

Take care -- Dave

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Thank you Dave and your definition of a friend is heart warming. Hope you are keeping well. Take good care of yourself and many thanks for stopping by.

Chris

[Dave]

I am well and getting ready to celebrate my birthday tomorrow. I hope and pray that you and yours are well too.

[Christine Anne Shaw]

We are going into a tier 4 lockdown tomorrow. Not allowed to mix with anyone outside our household. It will be a quiet Christmas. Hopefully the vaccine will be coming our way soon. Happy Birthday for tomorrow. Have a wonderful day and keep safe Dave.

Chris

[Diana Popa]

"when death destroyed your beating heart
it cast a shadow over mine"- Such a thief, death. Such a thief, life too, at times. Really enjoyed this short piece...but with impact.

[Christine Anne Shaw]

Thank you Diana, I appreciate your visit. All good wishes.

Chris