Fall is coming!!!

Fall is coming!!!

A Poem by Justin
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Favorite time of time of year is coming!!!!!!!!

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Fall is coming!!!

 leaves will be turning different color

football season will be coming in.

the holidays of Halloween and thanksgiving.

nice cool breeze in the morning.

harvesting season will also be in.

racking leaves, one of the best yard things do to.

seeing kids jumping in the leaves and having a blast.

sitting outside watching the leaves fall.

all kinds of delicious food being made.

going for nice long walks.

enjoying every minute of fall.

© 2015 Justin


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The colors of each line go perfectly with your poem. The imagery you've created places the reader in their fondest fall happy place. Thank you!
Please keep writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Ah your poem makes me miss fall already. You perfectly summed up all the beautiful aspects that fall brings, nice job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Justin

6 Years Ago

thanks :) emily, fall is amazing!!!
My fav time of the year! good job

Posted 6 Years Ago


Justin

6 Years Ago

thanks it was something creative!!!
A great poem, the different colors used in those lines added more beauty to the season, great flow of lines and picture perfect fall

Posted 6 Years Ago


very creative piece, I love fall it's beautiful

Posted 7 Years Ago


Your poem captures every aspect I love about fall. Autumn is my favorite season after all. Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Justin

8 Years Ago

thanks Emily :) :) :) :)
This is great, your using style.

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is lovely.

while i was reading it, it made me feel as though i would be experiencing it as well.

great use of descriptive words.

really made me get the feel of it. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Justin

8 Years Ago

thanks ninja I am :) :)
Great poem!
I love the colors!
I also love fall! (Mostly because my birthday is in it lol)
Keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Justin

8 Years Ago

thanks :) :) :)
Fall is my favorite time of year too! Mostly because I can wear my sweaters and no one can say anything lol Great poem you wrote here. You really captured Fall in this poem =)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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