The End

Poem about the struggle to survive and giving in to the end

Try to understand

Exactly how it feels

To be misunderstood

Define what is real?

 

Visions are dark

My thoughts are bright

Never understand

Wrong from right

 

Temptations win

My conscious fails

Live in denial

Refusal to tell

 

Grab the knife

Should I bleed?

Find a better way

I don’t want to see

 

Sink beneath the water

Can no longer breathe

Mind fading away

My soul is set free

Author's Note

Not about me. I just like to write dark things. Any reviews greatly appreciated.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

interesting contrast between the darkness of visions and thoughts being "bright".. this was not an easy read... I know what that struggle to survive feels like and the feelings of not being able "to breathe"... sometimes we don't "want to see" that better way, but it is out there my friend.. overall, nice write..

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you!

[Lonesomeasalways]

Damn..., thats good! It easily keeps the readers attention!

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you!

[Lizardo]

I really like it, and I like how you added the ''dark'' them around the poem
Great job, keep on writing!

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you Lizardo!