I am sky...

Passion of heaven and earth, for the fairest of them all...

I am sky

And you are earth...

Let my winds

Caress your face...

Let my warmth

Roll gently over

Your fragrant skin...

My rains

Fill your rivers

And nourish

All your life...

My voice is as thunder

And gentle as the

Song of birds...

And I would

Cover you,

Guard you,

Caress you,

Forever...

 

Reviews

[DaniElle LaPointe]

Another strong example of sensual imagery. A nice free verse. Although I dare ask... What's with you and elans? ;p My choice of verses, would be the rain and rivers. That is striking in metaphoric value... I hesitate to say just what peaks my liking of it. Anyhoo... In true Canadian form I give this one an "EH"!

[emmajoy]

Few words, many images. Gentle flow, wild thoughts.

[SM Davis]

Again, your imagery here is impeccable. Simple and speaks volumes. Very well done!

[Wildfleour]

This is my favorite of yours to date, and I'm saving it.

[Brette Medb]

Romantic and whispy yet powerful. I loved the parallel in this it made for a great poem. There is just the right amount of delicacy and strength in this poem that it portrays the image perfectly. Great write,


Brette

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Lovely imagery of the connection between the heavens and earth - like the strength of a man to a delicate but powerful woman. Quite wonderful. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[RougeAngel]

i just love how descriptively you write! your poems are always so easy for me to envision.

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

Awhhhh!
Oh my gosh, you're such a romantic! (:
I love this poem.

[robin]

Nice concise and promising hope filled prayerlike wonderful! Artiste formidable!

[jen]

this is lovely, this part in particular made me smile:
"My voice is as thunder

And gentle as the

Song of birds"