TIME...

A life in technicolor...

 

Time screams
New life born
Pink blush
The color of spring

Time laughs

Two grow into one

Dressed in white

The shade of summer

Time smiles

Shared existence

Soft sultry tones

The flush of autumn

Time remembers

Reflecting life

Gray grace

The tint of winter

Time now weeps

As fingers let go

All the colors

Fade to sacred black..

 

 

Reviews

[cest la vie]

Oh, my I'm the first to review.. I am momentarily stunned.. I actually envisioned my lived life in these 5 stanzas.
"Time now weeps
As fingers let go
All the colors
Fade to sacred black"
(My world this past year)

This is brillieant. Wow, the imagary is incredible. I'm off to share this with a few I know will be as impressed as myself. Just spectacular..

[emmajoy]

What a beautiful poem, Craig. You use your love of life and how its spent, the colours of every season from birth to death, the emotions of every moment then, with your gentle poet's touch, weave it all into a wonderful tapestry of words.

Can only add one thing more .. breathtaking

[Brianna Brie]

This is awesome. I like the way that you used the seasons in nature to represent the seasons of life. Very creative work!!!!

[deeps]

This is such a powerful write here.
Quite interesting as well.
Very enjoyable read.
Very well written.

[Jenn Gold]

I love this. The last few lines especially. It's interesting how the size of the font and the capitalization enhances the words. It's very good.

[Sorry Infamous]

The last stanza was amazing. It was clever and final and wonderful. A new fave.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Ah!...that was...very very powerful and strong.
I simply loved this piece of writing..It was so deep and intense. The imagery in this was simply outstanding and that plot was very striking and appealing to the reader.
The way you concluded the entire piece was brilliant!
The metaphor into how everything turns into "Sacred Black"(here) is very thoughtful.
Great work :)

[Sagela]

This is brilliant. I love how the letters get bigger and smaller as time goes by. It really adds to the meaning of this piece. I love how descriptive it is in such few words also. Tremendous job on this piece and I congratulate you.

[Tiffany]

This is wonderful. I wanted a bit more of a bang at the end, a lesson or something, and decided to explore that a bit. The more I tried to figure out what the heck I was looking for the more I realized what a wonderful piece of writing this is. Kudos my friend...

Thanks for sharing, t.

[Helen Woodward]

WOW!!! That's a taste of reality put into REAL terms...what a peaceful mind you have Craig, you are able to make even death sound inviting...in a 'torn apart' kind of way. This journey is a well written and thought out slice of Craig Froman THE WRITER.
Accurate to the point of...yes, that's me!! Anyone who reads this will see their entire life to date.
Well done and kudos from your biggest fan...into my favs it goes :-)

[Tate Morgan]

this is quite interesting a look into the mind of a master