A Poem by An owl on the moon

Just a little chocolate fun... :D



It’s all full of sugar sweetness, dark confectionery delights

Love to devour it in the morning, afternoon, and nights

Colored bronze, mahogany, hazel too, tis über candy galore

Flavored with almonds, peanuts, carmel, dried fruit, and more


It’ll make you wear loose fitting clothes and smile in the rain

It’ll make you feel tingles on your tongue and leave the sweetest stain

Like a sugarplum to your brain. Come on!




Outside, inside out I’m livin la vida cocoa

You’ll crunch and slurp and say I’m livin la vida cocoa

Its flavor’s so rich and fine, its color the deepest mocha

You’ll crunch and slurp and say I’m livin la vida cocoa

Livin la vida cocoa, Come on!

I’m livin la vida cocoa!


Ate some truffles in New York City there in Times Square

Gobbled a Snickers bar and felt so good, I do declare!

Devoured some strawberries dipped right next to the champagne

Once you’ve chomped a bite or two you’ll never be the same


[Sing it with me now!]


© 2010 An owl on the moon

Author's Note

An owl on the moon
I rarely eat chocolate (goes straight to my hips) but I do love singing about it! (I say all of this tongue placed firmly in cheek…) My condolences to Ricky Martin for messin’ with this! Original song, if you prefer music to chocolate:

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Awe Craig! What a mouth watering sweet bite you'rv delivered to me, a Choco_holic ( I have wide hips, hehehe!) I shall dubb this my personal anthem! Thank you! 100 points!

Posted 13 Years Ago

This is awesome! I love it. Maybe I'll have chocolate for breakfast this morning. :-D

Posted 13 Years Ago

very clever!!!! I love chocolate and like you said can't indulge very often as it definitely goes to my hips as well. the nectar of the gods is what it was called before in ancient times. and I think Ricky Martin may not be amused ha ha but I was!!!! you could do a weird al yancovich version lol good poem/lyric I see you had fun with it lol

Posted 14 Years Ago

Yes, this should be the theme-song for a candy shop that specializes in chocolate! @.@

Posted 14 Years Ago

Very cute.
Makes me hungry for some chocolate, although i jus ate.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Haha! amusing. I love chocolate, i put it up there with oxygen and sex. I'm not a fan of the original version, so this has my vote lol!

Posted 14 Years Ago

When I saw the title I laughed and knew I had to read this write! C.A.B.S. and I are chocoholics so this piece automatically get two thumbs up. It is so true that chocolate makes you feel good too! Absolutely love it!

Posted 14 Years Ago

this is so playful and refreshing!! def got a smile out of me! wonderful piece!!

Posted 14 Years Ago

You will give Ricky Martin run for his money.....! More often than not I get to read philosophical pieces of writing. but this was fun, refreshing, sweet and chocolaty!
I am a chocoholic so I loved it !
It's chocolicious....mmmmm!!

Posted 14 Years Ago

LMAO, Craig, this is too cute!! I totally needed some chocolately silliness tonight. What a fine parody of a well-loved song. You rock! (And are very talented)

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on January 31, 2010
Last Updated on February 5, 2010
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