I drowned within a chocolate sea...

But what a way to go... :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I drowned within a chocolate sea

and felt the darkness swallow me

feared the worst; thought all was lost

over my mind such memories cross’d

saw sun’s reflection on the waves

tasty sweetness on my lips I craved

then I drank it down to the lastest drop

such sweet revenge; I couldn’t stop

travelled to a mall, a shop, a store

knew I had to have some more

and when my revelry was done

I smiled, though I weighed ‘alf a ton

now happy I am all my days, you see

for I drowned within a chocolate sea…

 

Author's Note

Grab your swimsuit… you won’t need a towel… Hope you're smiling...

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

I really love this! You paint a very tasty picture with your words here. Great job on this fun poem.

[Lilly]

You had me at 'chocolate sea' haha.
Great, fun write. Love the images and flow of this - yes, made me smile :)
Love it.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Yum. Very tasty and very heavenly! Yeah, I'd have to agree, what a way to gooo! Munching on chocolate and drinking chocolate.....!

[Star Wolf]

Wow, as a chocolate lover I want to drown in this sea! This is wonderful, its made me really hungry now for chocolate! A fun and awesome poem!

[Wolf]

Wow this, this really hit home for me having lost a relative the same way.

[OT]

ha you do wonders with that 4 beat! always effortless - tappable - clickable - to drown in a chocolate sea - certainly not the worse way to go haha! nice!

[Christie Moses]

oh yay :D what a lovely way to go!! I could die happy LOL

[Ladysue]

LOVE IT!!!!! and smiling...me and chocolate go way back...and yes what a way to go...lol...much enjoyed this poem...what a treat...

[Cherrie Palmer]

Wiily Wonka would be mad:)

[Lily Mae]

Another reason to love chocolate ;) xx