As if dust were diamonds

 

 

 

 

Breathing,

air running circles

around you…

And my eyes

catching fireflies

in slowing motion…

Emerald emotions

caress my memory,

piecing me into you

fragment by fragment…

Webs laced in liquid

filling in the spaces;

hollowed time

where there had been

only gray empty…

And you come

stand in my mind,

changing everything

as if dust were diamonds…

Reviews

[Nobody.]

:) I love when that happens.

GREAT WRITE!

cheers!
R.G.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Very creative and emotive work..Love the poetic quality of the work..Such a gift that you possess..Sunflower

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

piecing me into you fragment by fragment…Craig I adore your writing as I see that you love as deeply and as fiercely as I do........absolutely beautiful.

[Jaweena...Eileen Quinta..]

"And you come
stand in my mind,
changing everything
as if dust were diamonds…"
Nizhoni....beautiful thoughts expressed...style and form impeccable. Love the emotion.

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Romantic, sensitive...beautiful

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Senses run amuck i your mind my dear friend, it seems you gurad secrets well and unmask them for the reader at will, well done, good read.

[Katie]

Another beautiful write. I love the detail you put into each piece.

[DeleVan Sonta-an DellEr..]

love this so much....you paint and image and enliven the sense with your words.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautifully done! The words come together in perfect imagery! Excellent

Love the title!

[Dushyant Thadani]

Cute write... A lot of hope in this... Great job...