Wolf Cries

A wolf cries, joined by a chorus of the pack!

Wolf Cries

A wolf cries

It sends crawling shivers up my spine

I spot you, glowering atop a hill

Snout silhouetted against the radiant moon

Oblivious, to the fact, I am,

That you’re flanked by a pack of wolves

Rows of snouts silhouetted against the beaming moon

You cry out in unison

Breaking the dead silence of the night

 

  Forth Place

Feb 23, 2011

• About Wolves
• Wolf Cries

Author's Note

I <3 wolves, so decided to do a quick poem in honour of the beautiful creatures! Nothing is better than listening to the untamed sound of a wolf's howl! Please review!
Also not my picture, found off Google, it's a beauty though!

Reviews

[Twilight]

Slightly eerie, although more detail about the visual aspects of this scene might have added to the atmosphere? Anyway, wolves have often been associated with the night, evil and strength. Indeed, this raises the question of whether wolves should actually be feared? Personally, I hold the view that these grand creatures of the wild - should always be respected and protected!

[Zane]

Wolves are indeed such beautiful creatures. :)
Great job

[Jonathan De Elvira]

weeeeeeeeee wolfie...lol
the poem was good, i think too good to use for praising a hunter animal such as wolves..

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Beautiful piece~ I really enjoyed this. Painted a brillian picture~

[Warren L.G De Mills]

Nice! this one really got me! well done! great imagery and language . i really have no complaints.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Wolves are amazing animals. Can survive in all environments. I like the description and the very good ending to the poem. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[OT]

nice!!! it's strong and descriptive - short and sweet! and well written!

[hannajade]

I love wolves too!! unfourtantly, it was not me, but my mom and brother, who saw a lone black one howling and they watched him for like five mintuese!!
You really express the power that a wolf has in here, therefore 100/100.
:)

[Gone]

I love your descriptives. That picture you creat of a lone wolf and then the pack silhoetted agains the moon. and that spine shivering howl I can hear in my head. Wonderful stuff.

[deeps]

Such a wonderful write here, Like the detail and imagery.

[Poetic Beauty]

beautiful scene painted here.