Wolf Cries

A wolf cries, joined by a chorus of the pack!

Wolf Cries

A wolf cries

It sends crawling shivers up my spine

I spot you, glowering atop a hill

Snout silhouetted against the radiant moon

Oblivious, to the fact, I am,

That you’re flanked by a pack of wolves

Rows of snouts silhouetted against the beaming moon

You cry out in unison

Breaking the dead silence of the night

 

  Forth Place

Feb 23, 2011

• About Wolves
• Wolf Cries

Author's Note

I <3 wolves, so decided to do a quick poem in honour of the beautiful creatures! Nothing is better than listening to the untamed sound of a wolf's howl! Please review!
Also not my picture, found off Google, it's a beauty though!

Reviews

[Twilight]

Slightly eerie, although more detail about the visual aspects of this scene might have added to the atmosphere? Anyway, wolves have often been associated with the night, evil and strength. Indeed, this raises the question of whether wolves should actually be feared? Personally, I hold the view that these grand creatures of the wild - should always be respected and protected!

[tynamite]

The imagery in this is great.

[Jim Parson]

You've painted an entrancing visual here. Well done! But since I'm a horror writer, I think they should have eaten someone. Ha ha!

[E.H. Monroe]

The compounding like the whole crew coming out to silhouette Artemis in her beauty.
SHort and sweet
nice job

[A Risen Heroine.]

I like your use of words in this poem.
The describtion is pretty good as well! Kepp up the good worj and thanks for sharing!
~A Fallen Heroine~