Promise

Keep a promise is not hard!!!

Keeping a promise

Is not hard.

But people just

Can't do it.

 

You promise

Family,Friends.

But you never

Keep the promise.

 

You promise to

Love them,

But you never

Do it.

 

Keep the promise

Of love,

Start loving them now,

Don't be a selfish people.

Reviews

[Fontane Wong]

Sometimes, it's really hard to keep a promise. There are kind lies, I often lied to my friends. The teachers always teach us to follow our promise once we made it, if my friends ever ask me am I ok(while I'm not), my answer is 'yes, I'm ok and that's nothing to worry about'. But of course, that's not the truth, I didn't want my families or friends to worry me, so I often lie. Breaking a promise sometiems may not me bad. An excellent poem.

[Ethan Paz]

As Niki logo says, "Just do it." Yet it is so hard, you got to admit, because our flesh does not want to. Good job. It's true.