Balanced

A tranquil poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Balanced

Breathing in

Breathing out

No thoughts come in

No thoughts come out

 

Focusing on breathing

Is all that’s required

 

Crystal clear is my mind

Peaceful is my soul

Happy is my heart

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I've recently started regularly meditating. The results are amazing. I'm loving it!

Reviews

[Alicia Schroeder]

I love this!

[Black Cat Fever]

Very peaceful, meditating is wonderful.

[Michael of Gilead]

i like the picture, staring endlessly into the reflecting waters

[tynamite]

I like the clarity that this poem speaks.

[India Brooks]

Oh, and good job by the way!!

[India Brooks]

A lot of your work seems to relate to water, I find that the case with many aquarius...? :D

[Puzzle-bot]

making my mind 'blank' often helps me when I'm angry, frustratted, bored, tired, disturbed, whatever! It works just as you wrote here in your poem - amazingly!! You captured the peacefull in your poem here, Marie!

[Tina Kline]

Meditating is very relaxing and does bring a sense of peace and calm. It does for me, I find it very helpful.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow very insightful piece you have here. Excellent write.

[Short.Nerd]

This is so wonderful! Very calming. Nice job(: