The Talisman

The Talisman

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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A creepy poem.

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The Talisman Ride

The Talisman rides by my side

My life is over there’s nowhere I can hide

The lone crow does a fly by as we ride

A dead manatee has washed on Beachside

Only moments until I’m not alive

His sharp knife is pressed

Deep into my hide

How did I get here, what rules did I not Abide

I want life to continue, I cannot lie

What did I do wrong what was my crime

All I did was to enjoy my life

Why was his madness generated when I smiled

Now it’s time for my life to subside

With my blood draining I’m barely alive

© 2010 Marie Harrison


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Ooo....creepy. Gotta love the scary. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


great poem, spooky

Posted 10 Years Ago


Good job.. a little scary though..

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is haunting.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is great - I can feel the angst at a life almost over, the fear, the questioning...

Excellent work, my friend!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wonderful imagery. I can see the scene so clearly in my head. Thanks for sharing this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


whoa scary!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I wonder which part of the hide is blunt..not that this was the only thing which caught my attention. The poem deserves much more than my usual. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on November 8, 2010
Last Updated on November 8, 2010
Tags: Dark, Depressing, Haunting Write

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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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Momma told me to get out and enjoy life, so now I'm going to dance. more..

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