Petal Power

Petal Power

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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A flower poem.

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Petal Power

Your petals brighten my day

They have the power

To sweeten sour days

 

Rays of sun

Shine light on me

When you’re

Within my view

 

Your vibrant hues

Change my tune

Little Flower

 

© 2010 Marie Harrison


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Pritty :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


So lovely. Great photo too.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is cute. I love this. Great write :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Don't think I'm showing off. But this exactly seemed to me like the positive version of one of my poems (http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/DineshThePoet/639660/).

The only thing off is the word 'tune'. It's a word of yesteryear and doesn't fit in with the rest, younger words.

Keep writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Love it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


THis is fantastic!!!!!!!!! I LOVE it!!!!! :):)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Oh so very sweet, Marie! I just love this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A Simple Great Poem!!
Nice Written, and there's no words to describe the beauty of this poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago


What a "day brightener" :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


This so simple but so powerful! and wonderful! great job

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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