Candy Land Dance

A whirlwind dance of rapture

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Candy Land Dance

As tuxedo

Licorice sticks spin

While festive red

Candy canes dance

Their twirling waltz

In the autumn wind

 

Bells of the

Cathedral will sound

As we embark on our

Dance of honeybee’s glee

 

Let’s electric slide on

Our tangy rainbow floors

Here we’ll begin to explore

Joyous rhapsody of

Gypsy folk love

 

Mingle with spider monkeys

Jive with baboon groups

Playing their bassoons

 

Let loose with kangaroos

Whistling Dixie on

Their shiny maroon

Cinnamon flutes

 

Ecstasy we’ll find

As peaceful

Music subdues our

Ire and pangs as volatile

Violins rise and fall

Within their string

And bow range

 

Hershey kisses

Will melt us

In our candy land

 

Reviews

[hannajade]

this was brilliant! good job!

[Arsenic Nemesis]

I like this a lot, it's very sweet, love it! (Kinda makes me want some sweeties now... D:) Really well worded, I loved it. Keep up the good work!~

[Alicia Schroeder]

Beatiful and Sweet. I love this

[Jibey]

Sweet! Lovely mixture of animal and candies...

[An owl on the moon]

Used to play the game, which I'm certain has calories in the cards, and your poetry here just brought all the delicious joy alive! What a way to go!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

What a fun wild romp this was....sounds like a really fun time!

[Robin]

a surreal frolic through a candied playground

[cfix]

This is wonderful I enjoyed the flow and imagery in this write.
Very well written write.

[Poeticadia]

What a delicious poem! I was whirled away by this one. Wonderful rhythm, sumptuous imagery. In fact, I can even taste this poem.