Paper Thin Friendship

Paper Thin Friendship

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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Paper Thin Friendship

Computer compadres

Amigos sharing our angst

Exchanging our life stories and dreams

Overtime developing

A meaningful friendship

-        -   -

Had to leave for a few months

To attend to important life responsibilities

Creating life shifting changes in my life

Came back to write and

Share in this friendship again

 

-  -  -

 

Found myself

Mysteriously blocked

Paper thin friendship

One that blows with the wind

 

© 2011 Marie Harrison


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Marie Harrison
I was inspired by Georgia Gypsy's poem Delete...

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A wonderful peice :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love this. "Paper thin friendship".. amazing words, and can be so true. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Tis true

Posted 12 Years Ago


People come and people go on the net... It seems I go on for ever lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this! So true. Fab wording and awesome write! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I never delete no-one. On my Myspace site. 1500 writers and poets are hanging on hoping for the old way. People do get busy and sometime hard to find time to write and read. I like this site. Serious writers wanting to improve and learn from each other. I like the complete poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


so true..all i can say, love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


That's why I blow in the wind.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the casual style of this poem. But it ends very powerfully...

Paper thin friendship
One that blows with the wind...

Awesome

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I really liked this. It's very modern and quite different, which is good.
I think though that there is a bit of a style difference (if you can even call it that?) between the first stanza and the last two. The first is more artistic and each verse doesn't necessarily form a full sentence with the next (you know what I mean?). Whereas the other two have verses that follow one another more directly.
Don't get me wrong, despite it being a little weird to me, I really like it, I just noticed that change, lol.
So anyway, great job!
Cheers and have a good day.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on August 26, 2011
Last Updated on August 27, 2011
Tags: Friendships, Authentic Relationships, Character, Acceptance, Life

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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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