This Moment

Special are the little moments, often taken for granted.

This Moment


The Sun was just peeking through the bedroom window

Slowly moving up from your feet to take you all in

But this morning I was the first to gently brush your sleeping face

And he nodded to congratulate me in my win

How lucky I am to be this close to you

To be near the adventures of your dreams

To hear the soft subtle air from your lungs

And the morning angels as they sing

These are the precious gems of life

One of the rarest I'll ever see

A Gift the universe has granted

This moment that was given to me

If I never get this moment again

My eyes no longer open to witness

May the Sun & angels watch over you

And wrap my sleeping beauty in their kisses.

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

This is so damn beautiful, Christian. Seriously, I think I melted in the caress of your words. I love this piece so much. I am lost in this instance of a moment you have described and my mind doesn't want to release it. This is dripping an intoxicating love into my veins. Definitely another favorite of mine. Stunning write. Absolutely stunning. xo (:

[Chris Micha]

WOW!!!!!!
I am truly speechless Madalyn. You have made my day with your amazing words. All I can say is thank you and tell you how much of an honor it is. You're an amazing talented writer who I have much respect for. Thank you!!! :)

[Madalyn Beck]

Stop that!! We're on your page. Flattery goes to you!! ..But, thank you. Everything I said was well deserved with this poem. I couldn't stop coming back and reading it! (:

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is beyond gorgeous Chris.You left me speechless and let me tell you that is no easy feat lol. Every line compliments the next so well :)

[Chris Micha]

Awe thank you Vidya! As always I am honored :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Glass Heart Inc]

How lucky I am to be this close to you
To be near the adventures of your dreams

This is my favourite part. This is a lovely romantic poem that would make her happy if you show her. I loved it!

*congratulate

[Chris Micha]

Told you I can't spell lol. Thank you for that wonderful review!! :)

[Glass Heart Inc]

Don't worry it's just that one word. I just gave Stevo the POE-t part review in Afrikaans : which is worse. Because it's not just forgetting one word it's forgetting English. :P

[Chris Micha]

Lol dang girl :)

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

I really enjoyed this :) great poem. I loved your word choices.

[Chris Micha]

Awe thanks Taylor!! :)

[Bright Ocean Star]

This may be the most romantic, lovely poem i've ever read, as well. Beautiful imagery and sentiment...it's just full of love and emotion....love the last four lines....well done, Christian!

[Chris Micha]

Dang what!! You guys are freaking me out ha. I never thought it was that good. You have made my night and I am truly honored, more than words!! Thank you so much!! :)

[Mister_Sir]

This is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. My favorite part is "May the Sun & angels watch over you And wrap my sleeping beauty in their kisses." Your poem is intoxicating. Absolutely marvelous. You just earned yourself another subscriber, so keep up the beautiful work.

Neurotically yours,
Mister Splitbrain

[Chris Micha]

Wow I'm honestly blown away by your comment. Speechless is a better term! I can't thank you enough for those amazing words!!! :)

[rav1209]

Lovely poem, brief but still gets the point across. Great job.

[arejoleacher]

This is such a sweet poem, I can just see the sun rising and feel the warmth that this poem gives off, good job. :)

[Chris Micha]

Thank you for those beautiful words :)

[melissa]

This is a beautiful poem keep up the great work i hope you get all of your poems published because I want a copy of them i enjoy reading them

[Chris Micha]

That's really sweet Melissa...thank you! :)

[melissa]

You're welcome

[Glass Heart Inc]

She said the same thing word for word to other people.

[melissa]

That's because I'm telling the truth i really do enjoy reading Poems and books and stories all the writers are amazing writer's

[Rose Black]

Loved this poem so beautiful ... sometimes moments are so perfect but they are not ment to last maybe that's why they are so perfect ...

[Chris Micha]

Thank you Rose. You are so right about them! :)

[Rose Black]

You're wellcome... Christian