What If...

What If...

 

 

What if...

You & I...

Existed in the collective thoughts of fate

Spinning aimlessly around in our cocoons

Until we collided to birth into a beautiful disaster of infinite parallels

 

What if...

You & I... 

Were the cortex that held together time

While being sheathed by the fabric of forever

Would we collapse time and trust in forever?

 

What if...

You & I...

Could be the endless possibilities of everything

Where everything led us to the creation of endless possibilities

Where we would be the exception to all the things that are not possible

 

But...

What if...

You & I...

Just simply belong together

The traditional soul mates of whatever this all means in the context of reality

And we just simply loved beyond all of the "What if's...."

 

Would that be so bad?

 

 

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

What if...
You & I...
Just simply belong together
The traditional soul mates of whatever this all means in the context of reality
And we just simply loved beyond all of the "What if's...."

Yes, please!! Ugh, this is exquisite! I cannot even describe the power behind this poem. "What if" indeed. But the unknowns in life are the true adventures. Same goes for the love you have expressed here. We never know, so love is the greatest adventure every person embarks on.

What if love did not sustain our every need?
I think life would have no meaning.

Well, I went on a personal tangent there and I'm not sure if you'll follow or care to try to make sense of the mess in my mind. BUT, this was a great and thoughtful write. Beautiful. :)

[FancyMee]

Simply beautiful, love it

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Fancy :)

[Daydreamer]

Oh Lord! Stashed wishes cause you to make so many futuristic plans and wander away in your imaginations! It's also good to have a reserved solution incase these wishes dont go on as the lovers wanted but they got their ultimate wish; each other! Wonderfuuull!!!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Miss Manal :)

[Crystal Ellyson]

Very beautiful and romantic!!! Love it!!!!!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Crystal :)

[Matching Socks]

Very romantic.
Your style is very unique

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Ance :)

[Valentine]

Still..what if not? Isn't it worth the risk to take the chance? A thought provoking write. Valentine

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Valentine :)

[Lyn Anderson]

An interesting set of questions. Your line of thought is well followed and well portrayed.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, KL :)

[Bright Ocean Star]

I love this one, Christian. It is deep, wistful, and fantastically romantic. A beautiful use of the term, 'What if...? I especially love the last line.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much my dear friend :)

[NoelHC]

I always enjoy repetition used properly, and in the case it worked well for me. "Just simply being together" Yes. That.

[Chris Micha]

Ha thank you so much, Noel :)

[Brave girl]

What if...
You & I...
Could be the endless possibilities of everything
Where everything led us to the creation of endless possibilities
Where we would be the exception to all the things that are not possible


that would be my fav part, just because i like to study mathematical possibilities and because you used it in a poetic way (i think math is so poetic :p ) anyways, i really loved it, the what if's is very ironic,everything could change just because we said a simple "what if"....beautiful write, i honestly think this poem is soooo much better than my poem "what if" !! great ink,keep it up =)

[Chris Micha]

Wow..thank you so much for the awesome review :)

[Brave girl]

you are welcome, u totally deserve much more :)