Found In You

What was found when I lost myself in you.

Found In You

I lose myself in you seamlessly

Time stops in your eyes

Pulling me into a world of flawless eternity

Surrounded by diamond studded skies

Dreams dart around me

Enticing me to enter them

With the lure of the unimaginable unseen

And of sins conjured in the P.M.

Your thoughts are a chaotic beautiful mess

Of unorganized fields of blossoming love & disillusions

But I'm here to tend to the fields

To weed out the rows of doubt & confusion

Your heart once thought frozen over

Sits lonely in an isolated chamber

Just wants a night in shinning stars

To guide and watch over her forever

But what I found when I lost myself

To all the magic tricks you use

While searching your heart for love

 I found myself in you.

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

I'm honestly speechless on what to say right now cause this was so beautifully written! Such amazing imagery, storytelling, honesty. The whole works, you definitely have it here. I love the structure you used, the tense...um, what else? Sorry, this is so...wonderful and it made my heart glow. It really brightened my night to read this and as I write this comment, I'm still trying to find words to say to myself. I loved this though! So much!

[Chris Micha]

Wow...I am truly honored dear friend

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love the "chaotic beautiful mess" great oxymoron...

to be totally lost in someone else...heaven.

[Chris Micha]

Jacob, thank you so much my friend. I shall be around to read your new stuff soon, sir.

[Lily Mae]

This has all the elements of love, romance, and devotion. Finding yourself in someone is like finally finding home. Well written..xo

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Lily

[KWP]

oohhh hello that was really divine ... i particularly like 'i found myself in you' ... that speaks volumes .. such a great flow that has equal amounts of sadness and perhaps desperation to be balanced out with seeming unity ... really enjoyed xx

[Chris Micha]

Wow...thank you so much. I'm honored.

[Pure Innocence]

Wow this is such a beautiful piece! It flows so well and the beauty behind the words is just astonishing. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry.

[Chris Micha]

Awe...thank you so much

[Crystal Ellyson]

Beautiful and great. Love it!!

[Chris Micha]

Thank you, Crystal

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Wow, this is a perfect write, it's so beautiful and cute. :-)

Kaze~

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much, Kaze

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

It was my pleasure. :-)

[NoelHC]

Well done, taking the chaotic, and working with it, to make it something beautiful and right, to find yourself in the other.

[Chris Micha]

My awesome friend, thank you.

[Lyn Anderson]

A lovely concept, and the tending fields line really works here. Good job.

[Chris Micha]

Awesome...so honored to hear that.

[Julia]

Beautiful poem. Nicely written and I love the ending.

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much Julia