When I Close My Eyes

When I Close My Eyes

 

When I close my eyes, it’s what I dream
The sweet taste from your lips
The soft touch of your hands
Your smooth as silk skin
It brings a smile to my face
And helps me forget about the evil
It reminds I am loved
And re-ignites my will to survive

If I ever did something
To turn your eyes away from me
I don’t think I would survive
Throughout the night, I’d feel empty
There was a void where I hold your love
Never to be empty again
The human soul is weak on it’s own
But shared with another, forever it lives on
 

Reviews

[Vera Iconica]

This peice is amazing. It flows beautifully, and does what any good peice of writing shoeld. It paints a picure in my mind.

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This is good. It has a flow that made me want to keep reading. It was romantic. I love the last two lines. Great work!

[Prose-full]

"There was a void where I hold your love
Never to be empty again"--very nicely written
The human soul is weak on it's own------i am in love with this line..its amazing..
"But shared with another, forever it lives on"--10.0...thats great by the way..

great write..smooth read...