SUNSHINE BRINGS A SMILE

SUNSHINE BRINGS A SMILE

A Poem by Susie Q

A cloudy, dreary day can make us sad

It makes us think rain may be on the way.

The wind might blow up a big storm

With thunder and lightning in the sky.

Now and then the sun will peek through

Just to say, " Hey, I'm still up here"

One little ray can make you SMILE.

After the storm usually comes the sun

To brighten our world once more.

 

© 2010 Susie Q


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I guess that is why the guy who made that smiley face with "have a nice day" is, now, a multi-multi-multi-millionare. I think the happy influence of sunshine on our personality, for the day, must date back to the cavemen. Sometimes, we can find our own sunshine, too, during the storms of our lives. You have been my sunshine, quite a few times, Mom. All it takes is one ray of sunshine, one ray of happiness and hope, to make us forget about the gloom. This is a short, sweet nicely written tribute to our friend, Mr. Sunshine; we all love him so!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina Kline

6 Years Ago

This is very moving, indeed. She is so right.
Susie Q

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Tina, for checking out Christina's review. I thought you might like It.
Tina Kline

6 Years Ago

You are very welcome.



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A very beautiful and uplifting poem. The sun after a storm holds hope and promise of better days to come.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Susie Q

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Tina. The hope & promise of better days to come is something we all wish for. If you get .. read more
Tina Kline

6 Years Ago

You are welcome & i will.
The poem is true. After the rain, the sun will appear and we can enjoy the day. Thank you for sharing the excellent and positive poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Susie Q

6 Years Ago

Thank you as always, my friend. If you get a chance read Christina's review on this poem.
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Okay I will and you are welcome.
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I miss our friend Christina. She was a good person.
Simply Beautiful,
Short and sweet
just in so little works
very nice work here.


Thank you for your lovely
review.

thank you for sharing. Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 7 Years Ago


Susie Q

6 Years Ago

Sorry it has taken so long to get back to you but I appreciate your kind words always.
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

6 Years Ago

That's ok I forgot I commented this poem been so much else going on. You're quite welcome. it's a.. read more
My Dear Writing Friend,
A beautiful write containing a visual that is profound. Well written and a ray of sunshine in its self that warmed my heart.
Blessings, Laughing-Bear


Posted 8 Years Ago


Very lovely, enlightening and illuminating piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This poem is right on! I know when then sun is out, I feel better.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sunshine Is the answer to the blues

Posted 9 Years Ago


A nice little thought, it should cheer any dreary day.
*bird*

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cool write. The sun shining after a storm is always beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

makes me smile... always "above the stormy clouds" blue skies and hope.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on May 13, 2010
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Susie Q
Susie Q

Columbus, OH



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