Tornado

 

Tornado

 

A tornado went through today

Like a giant kid throwing

A tantrum

He turned the world around

And left the sky upside down

The sun set in the east

-it was gold and pink-

like some fantastic beast

that survived unscathed

through the terror it braved

Reviews

[Jade]

So very good and interesting

[Leah Simone]

This was an interesting take on a tornado - I liked the child throwing a tantrum, especially. The pink and gold beast was a very original image as well. - Great job

[Dwayne Spears]

So much imagery in so few lines. It shows a grasp of the art form that few possess. Keep up the great work. I can hardly wait to read some of your newer pieces. Love You.