Love, Your Secret Admirer.

Love, Your Secret Admirer.

A Poem by The Invisible Girl

My Love, 

I want you to know that when I'm
thinking of you it makes
my heart start to race

When I'm thinking of you it makes
my hands start to shake

When thinking of your smile 
it makes me blush

When I'm thinking of you talking to me
it makes me giggle nervously

When I'm thinking of how you say my name 
sends chills down my spine.

When I'm thinking of when I'll see you again 
makes me excited.

When I'm thinking of your eyes
it makes me want stare into them forever

Right now when I'm thinking of you 
it makes this hard to write

When thinking of you 
it's painful to know that you probably don't even know who I am. 

I pass you through the halls and never did you glance at me. 

I get the courage to talk to you, but you are with another girl
who is prettier than me...

But, I just want to say that I can't stop thinking of you. 

I never thought this could happen to a nobody like me, but
I know now that...

I LOVE YOU! 

You may crumble this letter and think this is a joke.
But its not.
To spare my pain
I wouldn't tell you who I am.
But I leave you with this


When I'm thinking of you I just hope you never forget me...

-Love,
your Secret Admirer

© 2012 The Invisible Girl


Author's Note

The Invisible Girl
A letter to my secret crush!! <3

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I thought to be incredibly sweet from the beginning down to middle, then a sudden sadness through the end. It'd be sad if he wouldn't know your true feelings and incredibly painful to see the person you love with another.

This was a very beautiful piece, a good job! Good luck with this crush of yours!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!! ^-^



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Aahh the sweet sadness of the crush!! I can't tell you how many melodramatic love poems I wrote in high school for my crush.. Unrequited love makes great poetry! Are you gonna give it to him??!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

No, I'm scared he will think I'm a creep :( oh well, thanks for reading though!! :D
I thought to be incredibly sweet from the beginning down to middle, then a sudden sadness through the end. It'd be sad if he wouldn't know your true feelings and incredibly painful to see the person you love with another.

This was a very beautiful piece, a good job! Good luck with this crush of yours!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!! ^-^
Oooooh, I would aks his name, but it's a secret apparently, and I"d probobly have no idea of who it was even if you did.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

lol probably! Thanks for reading though!! :D

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