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Falling in Love

Falling in Love

A Poem by The Invisible Girl

Oh, how I miss
Our late night talks
I wish to have our first kiss
With you by my side I want to walk
On the sparkling shore
Until we can't see no more

I can't fight this feeling anymore
It's building up inside of me
I can't seem to think straight
You are always on my mind

When you call me Gorgeous
It makes my heart leap
Your smile is so contagious
You make me laugh myself to sleep

Then you disappeared
I have not heard a word
My heart starts to ache
Maybe my emotions were fake

Please come back to me
So I can know for sure
If my heart was true
That I am falling in love with you

© 2013 The Invisible Girl


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"Until we can't see no more" You have double negatives in this line, it should read "Until we can't see any more"

I really loved this piece. The classic tale of a love, lost. You portrayed it with a personal flair, which makes it truly believable and heartbreaking for the reader.

~Stefanie

Posted 5 Years Ago


This was extraordinary. You have obvious talent. I will definitely be reading more of your work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


It's now totally a heartfelt piece you made, I really very enjoyed it. 100/100 :) Keep it up :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

6 Years Ago

Thanks! :) Glad u enjoyed reading it!!
A sweet and emotive write...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)...........
The Invisible Girl

6 Years Ago

Lol ^-^ :)
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

:)............
A beautiful piece indeed !!! Thanks for writing and for sharing :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


Oh to pine for that crush! I know this feeling and so well expressed here:) I hope he returns...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very sweet touching, emotional, heartfelt read.
I hope he comes back to you soon :)
Great write :)

Posted 6 Years Ago



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