The Night i first saw him

I really enjoyed writing this poem, I hope you like it. it is about a little child seeing Santa Clause for the first time on Christmas eve

        The 24th was the night I first saw him

       And I just couldn't help but sit and applaud him

      With his big rosy cheeks and huge black boots on his ginormous feet

     A fluffy hat on the top of his head and his outfit, oh so red

    With his milk moustache and mince pie crumbs, no wonder he had such a big tum!

   As he walked to the fireplace and gave me a nod, he shot up the chimney, and was gone!   

       

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

This was good and different...Thank you for sharing...:)....................

[Banana split !]

thanks for your reveiw

[Sami Khalil]

Any time...:).......................