Trembling

Thank you,
Veterans Day,
I always feel today,
Waste and loss,
Peace and gone,
Cool breath encircling the clouds ...
The mountains prayer flags litter the Sky.

Reviews

[Tree]

Catching up with your work Lee. Veteran's Day has always been a solemn spectacle for me, too. I always think of days out on Fort Bliss, Fort Sam, Bragg and Drum. Or overseas at camp Silo or God knows what name some hack in an air conditioned room would come up with. I think of suffering. But most of all I think of names like Gottus, Toy, Benoit and First Sergeant So and so, or the sad quiet ones in the corner who never talk, but know, what they are feeling.
Introspective piece, Lee. It made me think. Remember.

[lee von cleef]

Do you think I can drop the last "and"? Ps thank you for stopping by.

[Tree]

Yes. That would work fine..

[Norma M Sutton]

Short and meaningful. Nicely put.

[Sami Khalil]

Happy Veterans day to you and all... Let freedom and peace be our main focus and share it with the good will of all men...Bravo
I salute you from Al....:).................