In My World

I wrote this out of boredom!

In my world...

The sky is clear.

In my world...

There is no fear.

In my world...

The sun can sing

Oh, what love, it will bring

In my world...

There is no war

Could you ever ask for more?

In my world everyone smiles

And no one ever abuses a child

In my world

No one ever has to hide

Because in my world, they all have open minds.

If only my world was real...

 

 

Reviews

[Luna Northstar]

I agree, i wish it was real. but hey, my worlds a lot like that too, except,. you know, theres unicorns and stuff :) But really, this was an amazing poem, truthful and just great.

[Petal]

Loved it panda i wish your world was real

[Rae]

Nice poem! It seems everyone wants their world to be real, and everyone wants a world that has no hate, war, abuse, etc. If only this world was real. I don't usually review poems but I wanted to review this one because it reminds me of my world. :)