Slice

A Short Poem From The Heart

Sliding Slashing,

Cutting Thrashing,

 

Open.

 

Bleeding.

 

Death.

 

Reviews

[.]

God thats to the point! Short and scary but very visual.

[.]

Hell Yeah!!!
Damn--I Love This--Awesome!!!

james:-)

[Emunah June.]

OH geez! Nice work though! :D

[Zoe]

i like open a lot

[Rae]

This is very deep. An overall great poem even with the few words.

[Rain]

yeh, I agree it's powerful in such limited amount of words
uhh, I'm not going to say anything about what you're going to do, 'cos I've heard that sometimes people just write stuff, that has got nothing to so with their personal life, so I don't want to annoy you. :/

[Kanattas Atir Enomo]

wow this was a very short, yet powerful poem. and i know what ur going through. :/ but dont do it. theres too much to live for. the only thing that irked me was that u misspelled Sliding and Bleeding

[Luna Northstar]

Whoa... :/ its just a poem right? not like... actual thoughts... right?

[Petal]

DON'T COMMIT SUICIDE
cause you can't be SUICIDAL SUICIDAL
but it was a good poem