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Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation.

You said you loved me but I walked away,

Now after all these years and countless lies,

For the first time since that night,

I see you..... 

Laid down,  all cold and white.

Tears roll down and burn my eyes,

I kneel to kiss you goodbye,

And the only words that cross my mind,

Are the ones I whisper,   before I turn away one last time.

I Love You.

Reviews

[Nusquam Esse]

This has an incredible level of depth with how few words you use. I particularly liked the way you transitioned the whole poem around the fourth line, something so succinct to join two poignant segments. The second part really reminds me of many things I have scribbled in the dark. Those nights fearing what it would be like to lose someone who means everything to you, even if you don't know how much they matter to you yet. Love the imagery in your second to last line.

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you so much for your kind words.
And yes the fear off loss is often the greatest.

[Jeannette Lunete]

You have beautifully expressed through a few words the infinity of love. The intensity and depth is quite thrilling. Well done! :)

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you for reading and appreciating.

[Stonz P.]

This is a great piece with an unforeseeable twist and love the heart-breaking imagery.
Good write.

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you for your kind words. :)

[justaishaaa]

A beautiful piece, the simplicity of the poem and words chosen adds to the effect of the emotive content.

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you.

[MsJewel]

You have said so much and shared such strong emotions in so few lines. Brilliant writing!

:) Julie

[Angad Waraich]

Hey!
Thank you so much for reading and appreciating. Means a lot :)

[Cindy Marietta]

Absolutely love this. Especially how in depth this is, and how after time the love is still there. Great poem

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you for reading appreciating.

[RAOrourke]

Beautifully expressed with emotion. I could see and feel the images your poem brought to mind. The haunting of loss and love. Well done!

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you appreciate it.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Its beautiful,, love is the most beautiful feeling,,
and you have expressed it in a beautiful way in this sad poem

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you appreciate it.

[Tom]

You may only get one chance at love, so don't rebuke it !

A tender and poignant heartfelt poem, nicely conveyed with a tragic pathos !

[Angad Waraich]

Thank you appreciate it.

[Myle Rent]

This is very sentimental. It's like you told the whole story without saying a lot. As always another well done piece of touching poetry. :)