The Drink

The Drink

A Poem by M. View

The Drink

 

I seen you come into the backdrop

And it made my heart do a sudden stop

Because all my blood rusted to one spot

But I’m not ruled by that reaction

Because trouble follows that infraction

When it’s done just off of attraction

Or driven off of just my personality

In other word my dogmatic qualities

That affects my individuality

And makes me perform like every other chap

Because of the movement of my lap

To feel the wetness of your tap

Shake a shimmer and oh the head yeah I said the head

Makes me desire the spread

So as you touch my lips it makes me forget what was said

As I feel your sweet nature that makes me wants to stand tall

And sing on every roof top to every town hall

The bartender shouts the very last call

So then I guzzle it down until there is no more

Then stager my drunk as out the door

As I here the Hennessey say never more

 

© 2009 M. View


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And makes me perform like every other chap

Because of the movement of my lap

To feel the wetness of your tap

Shake a shimmer and oh the head yeah I said the head

Wow! So much imagery in this, and a potent drink that is too!!! Whew! I really enjoyed this quick paced read, left you sitting in its wake enthralled.

xxoxx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Like the play on words, start out thinking something but ends up different. Imagery is great. Very cool!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice very very very nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm working on a part 2 to this one becuase of the reviews

Posted 12 Years Ago


That's why I don't drink Henny no more! Good pen.....

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And makes me perform like every other chap

Because of the movement of my lap

To feel the wetness of your tap

Shake a shimmer and oh the head yeah I said the head

Wow! So much imagery in this, and a potent drink that is too!!! Whew! I really enjoyed this quick paced read, left you sitting in its wake enthralled.

xxoxx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Giggling my but off! Hahaha, this is told right. The Hen can lead you astray, for sure. Enjoyed!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ha ha ha. Wow. I had to laugh a moment on this one. Oh and the effects of Henny is beautiful. lol You know what they say........A drunk man tells no tales.


Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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