You, I Love You

I enjoyed your kisses,

as you pushed your lips,

on my icy ones,

you burned my lips,

as you put pressure,

on my lips.

I enjoyed your hand,

as you took my hand,

hand by hand,

your warmth ran to mine,

your hands buried mine.

You never believed,

I am nothing worthy

but whatever happens

I love you.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Dalebear]

Good write

[No regret]

its amaizing . Great !

[Linear]

I think it's beautiful in it's simplicity, excellent

[Short.Nerd]

Nice

[sarah]

awww this is wonderful

[Kimberly]

I love this one. Very good.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i love the repition in this poem, it makes it unique- very good!

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i think it's beautiful Cynthia :)

:)

[DesertRose]

I really like this! It has a warm feeling to it!
I like it :)

[Fontane Wong]

A simple but great love poem. You expressed your feeling openly. I am sure it have a great meaning behind this poem. You make me want to keep reading on your poem. Great job on this poem!

P.S Change your word a big larger, it's a bit diffcuclt to read it.