Forever We Have

Seth chuckled as he played with my hair " You know what? You are being so Betty." I laughed lowly, " so? Is that wrong?"  Seth sighed " No." As he turned away and looked back, and asked " Let me." I looked up " What do you want ?"

Seth looked down, meanifully " You." I gigled softly into his ears " I am yours." Seth pursed his lips unhappily " You misunderstood me." I bit me lips " What do you want then?" Seth blinked at me " Guess." I said steadily " I don't want to guess."

Seth sighed " Fine" As he dragged me down and touched my lips with his. The kiss was urgent, as his hand suddenly burnt mine. I tried to push back, no, not tonight.  I pushed him off, as I moaned " stop that Seth."

Seth loooked up " Isn't that what you want?" I shocked, sadly " Yes, I do want nights like this, but not tonight." Seth looked down again " Why?" I bit my lips again " Just not tonight, I am bit of...... emotional tonight, ok?"" Seth nodded " Fine."

I smiled, and brushed his lips " Thankyou."  Seth smiled back " We have plenty of time for that." I sighed '" Yes, forever."

Author's Note

I can't say it's a love story, but I try as hard as I could to make it sounds like one..... please don't me too pointy at my mistakes, I have never written a proper love stories! Do you think the title is good?

Reviews

[Linear]

Well I liked it, i would call it Morpheous in the Underground.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Nice written story, great plot! What about naming it Forever Love?

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really nice and sweet. Can't think of a title either . . . My own guess is Kisses in the Night.

[DesertRose]

It's cute :)
but, try to seperate your dialouge into different paragraphs.
Great little short story, though! :)