Forever We Have (2)

I and Seth was a item, forever, and yet, I can't help myself to smile and laugh! What will I want except Seth? Nothing. I can tell you, no one will be as lucky as me, having a perfect boyfriend who will always on my side, who always love me, and awwww!

I am lucky cause I am in love with the right person, Seth. I am lucky cause I can be cared by the person I care as well, Seth. I am lucky cause I can be a part of the most important person in my life, Seth. Yes, Seth, Seth and Seth! I can't think of anyone else besides him!

I remembered the night I refused him, and that surly test out he really do loves me, cause he could wait. Don't get myself wrong, that night don't mean a test, it's a reason why I love him more than ever! It has been two days since that lovely night...... And memories never fade out me......

Seth called out " Betty! Are you going to lunch or not?!" I laughed " Yup, coming!" As I went downstairs. Yes, our first lunch date, I have never known what to do in a lunch date, but I believe, with Seth here, everything will work perfectly.

Seth words swing in my head ' forever we have', yes he swore we have forever, and it's real.
yes, forever, everything I have dream of.

Author's Note

since some people said I should write on, so, there it is, my second part

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

this was nice work, and i'm glad that you've built on constructive criticism, now that is the way forward to success. i sure like this one, but i have to agree, you can make this a little less stiff. the way to do this basically is to keep writing until you can establish a natural flow in English, and then correct your past work.
nice work here!

[SOUL LESS]

*Seth and I*. A little stiff. Allow it to flow, the emotion i mean.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

The love is spewing through this half!

[Linear]

Seth, Seth and More Seth, but yes the emotions flow over the rocks of poor grammar, to leave the reader with a picture of a maiden in love, and so excited over a dinner date. Well done girl

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

So sweet and cute. Keep it up!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This chapter is full of genuine emotion.
I love the intimate details. I somehow expect
him to glow.

[OT]

nice continuation! your descriptions are getting better as you open up the story a bit, I liked it!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!

[Jibey]

All sounds very Romantic!

[Arsenic Nemesis]

This is sweet, I like it a lot - so cute. Really nice work here, I enjoyed it - keep up the good work!~

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good beginning. You described the characters and open the door for a story. A interesting beginning.
Coyote