Remembering You

*sigh*

Remembering you...
Makes me so sick,
so sick that I regret,
to leave you...

Remembering you...
Makes me cry,
crying for the memory,
that I hold you tight.

Remembering you...
Makes me hate,
hating for who I am,
the me,
who dislikes you.

Why?
Why did I go away?

Why?
Why did I hate you before?

Why?
Why am I doing this?
Remembering you...

Author's Note

I don't mean to spoil the feeling of Valentines!! Don't get me wrong, but I just can't think of something sweet now, please understand it :(

Reviews

[Marie Harrison]

This is great, I love it1

[Kimberly]

I do understand and I'm sorry. The poem is good, though heart-breaking.

[markstringer]

Cynthia,
Some of our strongest memories are also those which stir up the strongest emotions, unfortunately they are not always lovey-dovey ones. Awesome writing.

[Linear]

Some memories are indeed made of bliss, some however are made of this. Dont apologise for writing from your heart

[Coyote Poetry]

Some memories of love can leave us sad. Hard to walk the line of perfection in the emotion of love. We must lose to understand the good times. A very good poem with a story of love sadness and disappointment. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

I think this fits valentine's Day perfect. We often don't know what we truly have until we loose it forever. you did a good job expressing that... Great job!

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

Beautiful work!
Could you review some of mine?

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good efforts..!!!

[YouoweYoupay]

I can relate to te feeling of wanting to get away, but regret it bitterly later. This poem was sad, but it was realistic and well-exprssed. Thanks for sharing.

[Ashley Myers]

the past always seems brighter than it was, the present always looks darker than it is, and the future never looks as bright as it will be