Attitude

Attitude

A Poem by Hebe
"

You know when it's the end!

"

Give me a rose

I want a diamond

am I being demanding? ....perhaps

you proclaim to love me

 but you just cast a shadow over everything

I want fine dining

 a chandelier, an embroidered napkin even 

 I think I deserve this treatment

Oh you think I have an attitude? 

how about a cherry in my champaign

a menu of gastronomic delights 

peacock, pheasant, turnip and potatoes yes that sounds very fine

I know I'm being difficult 

but you have never offered me anything ever

not even a flower as a romantic guesture

but none of that matters now

I saw you yesterday, kissing someone else

.... yes you heard right

very passionately, I might add 

she was holding a rose

Oh one more thing a honeymoon with a ocean view!

Goodness me, I never noticed before, how pasty white you look

but I think you just realized

 you cast a shadow over everything! 

this is goodbye

goodbye for ever!



© 2017 Hebe


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"Straight shootin' Son of a Gun" is what comes to my mind. I was watching the Tutors and the Elizabeth series on Nflx and your imagery reminds me of the times of Kings and Queens. There is certainly nothing wrong with some fine wine and diamond shine! Thank you for entering into the 10 Words I Give contest.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Thank you Dr Thackery .....yes sometimes it does feel good :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hey, that's pretty good.

Bitterness is a strong closer.



Posted 7 Years Ago



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