In the Zone

This is my zone,

this is my home,

full of my pain,

full of my game.

Bare to the bone,

my papers thrown

all around again

Im a freight train,

just a full blown, homegrown

unknown with a wholesome tone

swinging my cane at this neck chain

while im chained down to this main frame.

Cause my main frame will be better known

when I'm more than just a solid stepping stone.

I'm not just a passenger train,

a place for people to advertise their campaigns.

I don't even get a loan,

for my participation in building their home

so I'm home-bound to my own crowd

who roar loud when I stand proud.

So I stand low and I bestow

the fame to the dumb show although

I'm about to forego

this path I've walked so slow

while I'm treading with my golden glow

so while I'm ripping apart the status quo

and living my life professionally like a pro

you can stand there on your U.F.O.,

keep pretending like we're playing Uno

while I smack it back like Blackjack

earning plaques to rack, cut no slack

with no attack to quack, I don't draw back.

So back draw your hacksaw while I withdraw my First Newton's Law

cause I'm about to push you and set in motion

the commotion potion of the devotion

and you can't stop yourself from rollin

and right now I'm under the notion

that this is my emotionless life just full of emotion.

Reviews

[Emily]

One of my favorites of yours!
Well done!

[Riley Justine]

I have a friend who writes things like this, he also raps! If you're interested in a collaboration with him I can always send him a message if you would like!

[Not here]

is he on here? whats his name? i wanna check out his writings

[Riley Justine]

I think he only has one posted but his his username is JKlowrider

[Cool Girl]

You're so good at rhyming! Lol
I'm jealous...

I love this poem!!
It's so interesting..

[Not here]

Lol thanks :) interesting is one word that could describe everything i write

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome!

Unique is another word you could use :)

[Not here]

lol thanks

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome!