A Natural Lesson

Haiku or senryu? How about Hairyu

 

Mother nature knows

that crying is essential

to the growth of things.

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

This is beautiful Dale!! Mother nature crying tears to water the earth-exquisite!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Amen to that.

[KAOlmsted]

Hairyu??? How is that pronounced...hi-jew-roo? I like it. And I like this Hairyu. Or Senku. Or whatever you call it. It's very beautiful, Dale. Very melancholy in a way, but so nicely said. Thanks for this one.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you... a pic I too today inspired it.

[KAOlmsted]

um...what? ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That should say a pic I took today inspired the poem. See I need my editor :)

[KAOlmsted]

Of course! TOOK...I'm dropping the old editing ball, aren't I ;-)