Make Sense Of Me

If you are want a taste

Don’t let it go to waste…

 

Just breathe in all of me

And you’ll know what will be…

 

Let your fingers trace my skull

To confirm I’m in for the long haul…

 

Look deep into my eyes

And you’ll be able to read my replies…

 

So now when I speak to you

You’ll already believe me to be true…

 

To truly love me

Means being able to

Make sense of me.

 

Reviews

[Traci]

Well written with a beautiful message. To love is to accept, even when we cannot make sense of things. All we can do is try and understand.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I couldn't have said it better myself, thank you.

[Lyn Anderson]

This is beautiful, and romantic, and well written. So I feel silly in pointing out, after better than 75 reads, that I think you might have meant breathe instead of breath, 1st line, 2nd stanza

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very much… me and my silly errors.

[Lyn Anderson]

We all do it. What concerns me is that people don't point it out.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Either that or not paying attention :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Either way ...:)

[NicholeHemstock]

I like this, you should try adding a melody and making it a song.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you very much.

[NicholeHemstock]

Always welcome!

[Simran Kewlani]

Nice work, Cowboy. You rhymed it well in this one. I like the message you are conveying through this poem. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much :))

[Simran Kewlani]

Welcome. :)

[Matching Socks]

Do you come with a manual?
Just kidding. :)
I like what you are saying, love allows us to really see a person in a different light.
We get to understand what makes that person tick.
Nice job.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I do have a manual but it is written in the language of sarcasm, LOL
Thank you.

[David Scott]

Hmmm?
Not sure I can agree with you on this one Dale. I honestly feel to love is to accept what we cannot make sense of at times... But, I do see your perspective here. I am not blind to the desire to been seen and understood for the most part.
The first four lines drew me in nicely. Your rhyme had a rhythm to it. :) Yeah.
Then you changed it up a little and I lost the flow to your rhythm.
Anyhow, I love your poetry and your unique way of thinking even if I do not love every write.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is cool… we all have our opinions and will not always agree, I appreciate you stopping by and sharing your thoughts.

[Coyote Poetry]

"To truly love me
Means being able to
Make sense of me."
Nice ending to the poem. Had the feel of a county song. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very kindly good sir.

[AprilRN1210]

I agree, to truly love someone you have to take the time and attention to not only look deeper, but understand.. "make sense" of them.. I like the example of looking in the eyes to see the truth.. well done Dale..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank so much sweetie… I always appreciate your feed back and love when you like my work.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i wonder how many of my exes really could make sense of me....poets are not easy to figure out, are they?

i really like this, although i tripped a bit on the first line...is that how it is supposed to read?

jacob

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

We are an eccentric bunch, but that is what makes us great. Thank you sir.