Who's Evolved?

Who's Evolved?

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

The animal kingdom stays the same; it is the human race that continually changes. 

Now the jungles seem fairly tame compared to the uncivilized civilization that we the people have built.

I guess the wildlife has become more evolved then the soulless two legged mammals, leaving me to believe that heaven is slowly becoming a zoo. 

© 2016 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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It can feel this way -- the supposedly superior species -- I guess it's all in how you define superior.
ps (more evolved than, as opposed to then).:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

7 Years Ago

Appreciate your thoughts.
The title sums it up in a nutshell. Foolish we are to not see as clearly as the wildlife we mindlessly persecute to extinction; it will be our ultimate undoing.

T

Posted 7 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

7 Years Ago

Thank you for sharing your thoughts from my poem.
We're evolving & devolving at the same time. Good one

Posted 7 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

7 Years Ago

Why thank you.
At least the animals kill for a reason. I'm so tired of watching the news.
Everyday something... This is not world I want for my children.

Posted 7 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

7 Years Ago

And their's is for survival, we do it for greed, jealousy, power and many other stupid reasons.
I definitely agree that the wild kingdom is less threatening than the human one these days. I like your theme of life being a jungle, but I would also like to see it expanded somewhat with details & examples. Your final analysis isn't clear to me: "Heaven is slowing becoming a zoo."

Posted 7 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much... glad you liked it.
You could be right in your assumption. Animals only kill for food, people find all kinds of reasons. Our society has never been perfect, it has had uprisings and violent protests but this summer is proving to be closer to an uncivilized planet more than ever.



Posted 7 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

7 Years Ago

Well said sir.

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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