Damn Work!!

Watching you awake from peaceful slumber

I hear a blissful sigh and simply smile.

As my blue collar hand caresses your cheek

With the loving touch of a dove’s beak.

 

You gaze upon me with a desired stare

This is a moment I love to share.

Speaking with hearts not useless words

Keeping this treasure in the now and forever.

 

My hand runs up your burning flesh

It makes me want to never leave bed.

Your hand traces my thigh and grabs my stem

A touch so soothing my ecstasy spins.

 

Wanting nothing more than to stay in your arms

And make hot love all day long,

But the cold cruel world awaits

And I still need to shower, dress and shave.

 

Just one more kiss before I’m out the door

But your sweet taste leaves me wanting more.

Walking down the drive thinking of you naked and alone

Tempts me to turn right around and say “Honey I’m home.”

 

Reviews

[None]

Yes, I recall this beauty and it all sounds so sweet. Someone has to pay the bills though and you'll have to wait until you get home. Maybe you have time at lunch? Weekends are made for that so enjoy them and treasure each day. A most tender and sweet poem. I like the last line how you worked that in. Great moments expressed beautifully!

[Dani California]

OH MY. This is so sexy Dale. What a great "piece" of work. lol Seriously sweets, it's written beautifully and its flow just glides....


"Just one more kiss before I'm out the door

But your sweet taste leaves me wanting more.

Walking down the drive thinking of you naked and alone

Tempts me to turn right around and say "Honey I'm home." "



Perfect! Great work!!

[BrightEyes]

and every once in a while - you SHOULD turn right around - work will always be there. Not always a possibility for certain - but a nice treat for everyone once in a while. very romantic piece - until you head into work anyway lol.

laura

[ELii]

Awe, this poem is so sweet and romantic. great word play with the stream of love and ecstacy. Nice1!