A Vampire's Dream Girl

                                                                                                

 

Her auburn hair is like an eternal fire

That set men’s souls ablaze with desire

making them helpless to resist

the path to dark temptation.

 

That alabaster skin oh so silky smooth

Gives the illusion of heaven

Between those sinfully milky thighs

That men would die to be between.

 

Lusting for the afterlife

For it has become her orgasm

When she uses sex as a skill

To draw in her victims.

 

She’s a vampire’s dream girl

With a taste for crimson glory

And seducing all that is living

With her undeniable sexuality.

 

Reviews

[Succubi]

wicked and very erotic...this is like my poem carrion mistress, but i love how you elaborated her sexual temptation and how she uses them to fool men...kind of like the w***e of babylon in many ways
the lust is driven and lovely in this poem
very fantastic

[Larissa G.]

Wicked and even erotic indeed. :) Nice job. I enjoyed it and vampires aren't even a favorite subject of mine.

[Flow]

A female vampire I believe would be more successfull than a male one, your poem captures the lust, desire and feeding from the heart to flesh. "alabaster skin" one of my fav terms. Excellent write~

[Angelic Darkness]

This is wickedly, dark, yet I felt a tinge of humor here.
Good write. AD

[Brette Medb]

Vivid. Imagine that, a seductress that even vampires long for yet she is mortal. Great write!


Brette

[Laura Sparkle]

Ha! Awesome!!!! I love it. so true :)

[Windy]

WHEW, that definatly had some serious heat! I bet that would be most mens and some womens dream girl!! You didn't even have to add the picture( although it's a good one!) your poem painted the picture of her wonderfully. Good job as usual Sir Cowboy! ;)

[Brianna Brie]

Her auburn hair is like an eternal fire
That set men's souls ablaze with desire
making them helpless to resist
the path to dark temptation.

Hot, hot, hot...sizzling hot. She is intoxicating. Real enough to reach out and touch. Sexy and dangerous! Loved this one from you.