A Face In The Clouds

 

She gazes with mysterious eyes

seeing things others only dream to see.

 

Her breath is like a gentle breeze

that brings flight to things cast aside by the living.

 

She’s got touch that leaves no physical prints

but helps those paralyzed by fear feel again.

 

Though no one has met her

those with compassion in their hearts

know her intimately.

 

You don’t have to seek to find the spirit

that lives within us all,

just look without your eyes.

Reviews

[Androglossia]

True enough, there's more to a person than what the eyes can see. Very well thought out..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much... sometimes I think too much.

[Androglossia]

Which is a good thing:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Very much so :)

[ice skater]

Very nicely done loved it

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[ice skater]

Heyy can u rad my poem and chapter

[Cherrie Palmer]

I agree with with Sheemait is a hiden truth found in the skies so blue

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

this one reads like a prophecy
a inspiring poem I think

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That sounds like a good interpretation to me. thank you

[Relic]

Excellent poem Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir.

[LA Lorena]

Very nice Dale, I like this spiritual write, and I do believe it is one of your best.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wow, thank you :)

[Holly Mason]

this is beautiful truly
look without your eyes ...one of my favorite things to do
the art choice is quite lovely although I cheated I used my eyes for that one*)
thank you for sharing

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much... I think we all cheat now and then, LOL

[Eileenws]

I was drawn in right away. I love spiritual poetry. Nicely done!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks, glad you liked it.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Yes! See with your heart. This is one of your best :) X

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[DIVYA]

The beauty that lies within...of perception and compassion. We all have a beautiful spirit but it gets snowed under by the louder worldly stuff...

Great inspirational message!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wow you are so correct... thank you for reading and adding your intelligent thoughts.