Beauty Of The Moon

just a quick thought in my head

  

The lunar glow of midnight

 

reflects serenity 

 

off a river of tears.

 

Reviews

[Belinda Rice]

The lunar glow of midnight



reflects serenity



off a river of tears.

isent this the truth you have been writing little ones lately i hope your doing ok but good write I can tell you that cause its the truth it can be a reflection of all kinds of things if you think hard enough.......belinda

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Beautifully penned, simple poem. Loved this, Dale. Very deep and thoughprovoking. Nicely Done.

[Robert Luna]

Very deep and thought provoking. Your little thought holds a lot of possibilities to be seen in different ways by different people.


Well Done!!!!!!!!

[An Ordinary Woman]

I can relate to this. It reads like a beautiful portrait.


It's lovely, Cowboy. Kudos.

[Antony]

This has a nice calmness to it, beautifully written Dale. Short and deep, it gives the reader a glance behind your eyes.
Tony

[Dani California]

"off a river of tears".

God's.

I love this poem. Wow cowboy.

[BrightEyes]

wow. powerful three lines here. These simple lines evoke so much emotion - perhaps that's why I like the night. The moon's glow is so much more forgiving than the harsh sunlight of the day; giving a false sense of calmness to the chaos of life - maybe that is what keeps the soul hopeful whatever it may face. excellent job here, Dale.

laura

[Blackbirdsong]

This is just a succinct and perfect poem. The title is what drew me into this piece and I'm so glad it did. This is really just a perfect gem of poem. You evoke so much in these few lines. I think you should definitely write some more of these.

Wow! Only three lines but very powerful. Great poem!

[Brette Medb]

Short but eerily profound. The beauty of the moon has always held its sway over me and the last line was so melancholy. Beautiful write.

Brette

[-!katie!-]

this is really good :]

short and sweet

awesome job

your an amazing writerr !

keep it up :]]