Somewhere In The Night

Somewhere In The Night

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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for the Beauty In The Darkness contest

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Out of the black soul of night

she is disguised as a child of the wind

in search of a grain of compassion

amongst the dirt of human tragedy.

 

Slipping through the trees like the breeze

till a tranquil sound that has haunted her dreams

drew her closer and closer that it felt

like a spell had been cast upon her wings

bringing her to the raging river

of every living soul's tears.

 

Curiosity drew her nearer

as she studied the flow

that brought about an eerie but peaceful feeling

as the pain that filled the currents

somehow also seemed so serene

in the reflection of the moons mystical beams.

 

She felt the rush of the water

caress her fingertips they tingled

and a single tear trickled down her cheek

for now she knew just why

humans must cry.

 

So to the heavens she returned

with joy in her heart

realizing humanity is still alive.

© 2009 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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I've read a fair amount of your work and this is amongst the best...Complex interwoven melodies and yet a smooth read and resolution of a mystery. When we cannot cry we are in that darkest night of the soul where even God appears as a devilish knave. Our genuine tears and humility are the cure...for everything. Super!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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This is stunning, really enjoyed :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Glad to hear that, thank you.
Humanity was touched by your angel...beautiful and stunning my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Oh this is unearthly & lovely ... I love that the search has a positive ( :
Really Lovely !

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Why thank you so much :) It is one of my favs that I wrote so I am glad that you enjoyed it.
Renée

11 Years Ago

I could tell it came from that sweet spot ! ( :
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

:)))
Love the last line...& love the idea of an angel finding beauty, or hope in the darkness of the world. Transcending beauty in this piece, you take the reader on quite a ride...fluid and vivid.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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wow..what a absolutely beautiful poem..this has the depth of emotional ..a peaceful and tranquil quality..the very essense of humankind captured through the eyes of sacred soul...divine.

Posted 13 Years Ago


What a stunning and very hopeful piece, an angel finding beauty and hope, and out of darkness was a light of life, and maybe one day this is how it shall be.........beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


What a dark and mystical write. I loved it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow…
Intriguing thoughts…full of… philosophical queries…… Fantastic….
I like it very very very much…….
Really..nice..


Posted 14 Years Ago


Beautiful. I'm very impressed. I don't even know how to explain it. There is something so different and enjoyable about this. Writing like this is touching, it's vivid. I like that you start out with such strong metaphors and images, and end with a fairly simple idea "humanity is still alive".

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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