She's The Woman

 

Like the magnificent waves of the ocean

Caressing the rocks with its pure touch

She’s the woman that cleanses my soul.

 

Like the endless blue of the clear sky

Illuminating all of God’s creations

She’s the woman that puts faith in my beliefs.

 

Like the full moon hypnotizing the night sky

Watching over those lost in the dark

She’s the woman that puts humanity in my heart.

 

Like the highest peak of Mount Everest

That displays beauty as far as the eye can see

She’s the woman that takes my breath away.

 

Like the dreams that captivate my sleep

Then vanish when I awaken to reality

She’s the woman I see but just out of reach.

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

I don't think I've ever been first to a "Cowboy" premiere, so I'll speed it up.
You know I always love your stuff. You have a way with the ladies and I'm sure they appreciate it.
You're great at expressing feelings w/o losing any masculine points in the process.
No "standing on mountain tops" and all that bullshit.

"Like the endless blue of the clear sky
Illuminating all of God's creations
She's the woman that puts faith in my beliefs."

Great words!!! I may have to borrow again, because my date tonight is because of "Beauty"(I'll let you know how it goes). Great write again!

[Inkdye]

Beautiful and insightful! The human touch we desire out of reach and expansive. Thank you for seeing the beauty and sharing it in your writing. I wish that feeling could stay with me...Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

[SallyS29]

What a beautifully scripted poem expressing feelings that reach out and embraced the reader.

Well done

[emmajoy]

What a lovely poem: it just drips with desire, yet, it's so subtly written it really reaches the heart in a very calm and utterly loving way.

'Like the full moon hypnotizing the night sky / Watching over those lost in the dark / She's the woman that puts humanity in my heart. ' --- that first line is unique and wonderful.

Dale, this is going into favourites.

[Tiana]

Wow Cowboy! This poem is absolutely beautiful, tender, full of depth and so very loving. I was mesmorized from start to finish ... Beautifully written my sweet friend ... Hugs

[QuietPoet]

This was so beautiful. Very deep emotions running through this write. Great write.

My favorite lines:

"Like the dreams that captivate my sleep
Then vanish when I awaken to reality
She's the woman I see but just out of reach."

[Collette]

Oh, if only most of the male sex could appreciate women in this way. You write in such a moving, beautiful manner. I'm swept off my feet, and slightly jealous of whomever this mystery woman might be. However, I think the best part about this poem is the ambiguity you give to the woman...it could be anyone...either way, I love it! Wonderful write.

[Seriana]

This is....awesome. :) I'm sitting here with a big smile on my face. I wish every guy felt this way. There is such a delicate, humble desire presented here, from a gentle and loving soul. Simply beautiful Dale. Thanks for sharing. You'll find her one day. :)

[Lauren Beth]

I LOVE it...as always you capture true love and emotion....I like how you express this dream or vision of the women you love, or hope to love, or want to one day find. I dont' know, but I do know this is a beautiful write :)

[Winter McPherson]

Lovely....

"Like the magnificent waves of the ocean

Caressing the rocks with its pure touch

She's the woman that cleanses my soul."

Beautiful write once again, Dale......kudos!

[Sheila Kline]

And, she is the woman you long for in the inner sanctum of your spirit - one who can provide solace to your soul midst the greatest of turmoil, one who can soothe a twisted and hurting spirit with a touch, one who can bring joy midst sorrow, one who can calm the fierce storms of life - she is one in the mist who beckons unto you......may you keep searching until you this woman of your longing who shall be such a magnificent person for you, as one as this shall surely satisfy the longings of your heart and spirit!
A very beautiful, and touching write!
Blessings to you!