My Heartbeat

My Heartbeat

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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I haiku you

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You are my heartbeat

Pumping pure red through my chest

Letting me feel life.

© 2009 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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Now THIS is incredibly sweet.
"pumping pure red". I adore that line, something about it is just so catchy.

Posted 14 Years Ago
The way it should be and feel. You nailed it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent. Says it all in just a few words.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Is there anymore to be said? No. Excellent, my friend. Quite Excellent!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You say so much with so little....wonderful job as always!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

It is beautiful how expressive you are with so few words.
This is wonderful Dale!

smiles-
kelli


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool



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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..

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